Milady of the Crystal Sea

Milady of the Crystal Sea

Written by Adam M. Snow

Milady of the Sea, 

sing and taketh me

where shadows dance,

with thou voice in trance;

far beyond the crystal sea.

Let thou voice be my guide,

to thou a morning bride. 

Sing and taketh me,

Milady of the sea;

Into thou raging tide.

Let my ship sail thou heart,

if morning dost depart.

Oh, treacherous dame of the sea,

will I be free

if morning dost depart?

Taketh of me, my horizon, 

that which is wizen

and give my heart a dream;

a glimmer of hope, a gleam

of the yonder horizon.

Milady of the Sea,

sing and taketh me 

into the deepest blue,

where thine heart askew,

beyond the crystal sea.

Let I taketh thou wine,

upon my lips so rich and fine.

To curse myself into thou sea;

to take of thee without a plea;

a voice of thou in which thy opine.

Milady, the sea is thine,

to dive into the divine.

To curse myself into thou sea,

I'll take of thee without a plea,

a nectar of wine.

I'll bare thee upon my heart,

as if a blade cut apart;

a drop of wine into the sea, 

oh be that Milady,

thou morning dost depart.

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Reviews

[T.W. Early]

I love the vocabulary you use in this and all your writing!

[Barbara Walker]

I like this piece, Adam, but unless I'm mistaken a lot of the places you used, "thou' should be changed to "thy". A sweet write!

[wordman]

beautiful,all the way round

[Sami Khalil]

Just gorgeous and so lovely. Title and all...:)..............

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful. My kind of poetry my friend. The sea and the perfect description. I like and I do understand. I need a year by the sea. Thank you Adam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bear]

First let me say I like to old English style wording and the artwork you chose is a very good fit. It reads like a fable, if you are able to create more tales as such and publish A.M Snow's Fables. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
Well done my friend :~)