Virgin Love

Virgin Love
By: Adam M. Snow

My first time loving heart;
I knew it from the start;
thus be a dream;
to let all sparkle and gleam.
If only thou knew my love;
was truly sent from above;
would I be here right now;
speaking a virgin's love vow?

How great is thy passion?
It pierces thee with fashion;
like a spear called lovers woe;
for I feel it's gentle flow.
Thus be a wish upon a star;
for I know who thou are.
Tis be but a virgin love;
sent from heaven like a dove.

Thus this be a lover's birth;
no money can equal its worth.
Thus it blooms gently like a rose;
and yet preciously it grows.
I have great affection;
for that girl in the moonlight reflection.
I am but a man unspoken;
with love never broken.

Reviews

[ForTheWorld]

nice write, virgin love, nice poem, great...brilliant write... =D

[Brianna Brie]

Innocence...love sure was a lot simpler before all the heartbreak. Sorry don't mean to cheapen your poem. We have all been in that place of virgin love. Nicely written!

[Awdures]

It reminds me of the epic love poems of Byron in it's formation. Lovely writing here. I really enjoy your writing style.

[FlawedByDesign]

Absolutely lovely, kudos!
Great flow and great rhyme; quite heartwarming and expressive. Your choice of words such as thus, thou and tis, gives an almost archaic quality.

Nicely done.

[J.Black]

I love the title of "virgin' love, especially because of its innocent and purity. This was great!