Bells in-Towered

Bells in-Towered

By: Adam M. Snow

 

By the name of those untold,

Benights the day, the lost behold.

Anchor down the bells in-towered,

ring no more, and be devoured.

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"ring no more, and be devoured.."

The last line was my favorite. A nice penning but even as short as this is, it has a lot of promise to evoke more than what's being said.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow, this is short but it makes a impact, you wrote this really nicely, i like this a lot.

[?]

Hey there Shakespearen
This is short but powerful piece, so are you saying the lost are gonna be devoured?
Sometimes short piece say so much more than the really long pieces.
Awesome!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Great message my friend! What an awesome hidden meaning. I pray for the lost that the will know before that day comes!!!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Powerful stuff.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Cool ...

Jazz ..

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

All cool except the devouring .. lol ...

Cool .. Jazz

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and without fault, what more those one want!

[Erica Daubert]

this gave me the mental image of a huge city night line with a sunset, the giant tower somewhere off center... i loved it.

[Jenni-Chan]

but i don't want to be devoured though.