Until I Soar the Horizon Before Me

Until I Soar the Horizon Before Me 

By: Adam M. Snow

Do I wake or do I dream.

Do I live or do I die.

Twinkle now I ponder here

As I travel, far and near.

I speak that I dare not speak;

I long after a dream to wake,

But not wake fully from a glimpse,

Leaving I but many simps.

Do I wake or do I dream.

Do I live or do I die. 

Until I soar the horizon before me,

I am caged until I am free.

Author's Note

***NOTE*** Simps mean Fools

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, the perfection that relates within the piece, it reflects the thoughts of young lovers, though emotion can not by itself have forgotten time, you tend to relate it more and more and more again, well done, good read.

[Jazique]

I loved this poem can I truly so i loved this poem, I reall like the whole 'Do I wake or do I dream. Do I live or do I die" and especiall "I am caged until i am free". Your words really just spoke as you writtten them in such a poem a to reach a certian point of achievment or destiney for then you can for tell what you will do as to live or die or speak or to not. Its like shakespeare in quote but, a different in briliance of your writings. So whether or not I'm making since; I just wanted to say I truly to like this poem and i can barely explain why but, it brought a smile to my thoughts and I say thank you and well done for such a wonderful job.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Do I wake or do I dream.
Do I live or do I die.
Until I soar the horizon before me,
I am caged until I am free."

Such wisely penned and thought-out words these are!