Death of a Dreamer

Death of a Dreamer 

By: Adam M. Snow 

Woe is I that death dost follow. 

Is I to die by hands of sorrow. 

Is I to lie in six feet under. 

Woe is I, now is sunder. 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love this. Simple as that. Simple short write, love the words use, and the rhyming.

[_]

So much said in four lines. Beautiful poem with a haunting feeling. :)

[Serenity]

I like the rhyming pattern and the way that it is styled. It is a very deep poem that although short gets the point across, and holds like I said a very deep meaning to it... It's a very beautiful piece, well written, and like most of your poems it was short sweet and to the point which I really liked about it.

[Charlotte Haran]

Short but perfectly sweet. The way you write adds a completely different message to the piece and gives the sense of a much deeper, much maturer subject. Very inspiring!

[Sleeping Maiden]

I really like how you use the old style of writing. This is deep and powerful even if it's short. Full of sorrow shows here.
Great job!

[Jazique]

Wow simple sorrowness with a pattern "Is I" speaking of your self in the second person. Nice job.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectyl simple and thought inspiring, well done.

[?]

oh my..this is so good..short but packed with such depth..
The dreamer in me has died a time or two..thankfull I find strength..a renewed strength to ressurect my dreams and make new.
Wonderful poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of old language and emotion to make your point in this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote