My Soon Forgotten Memory

My Soon Forgotten Memory 

By: Adam M. Snow 

Memories gone and left me astray, 

Alone without a thought, I wish it to stay. 

It's all I had in this once peaceful time; 

My memories and dreams, my once sublime. 

I lost what was real when moments endeavour; 

Alone without a memory, in this world forever. 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Touching write, I really like this.

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YOU SIR....are a genius! PERIOD. SO BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE IT! Your write with such beauty its jut so nice to read your poems!

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you

[L0v3craft]

Very thought-provoking! I really liked this piece :]]

I once imagined what life would be like if we had no ability to accumulate memories. And you wanna know something? It was probably the WORST mind shattering thing experienced, I mean some strange subtle horror swept over me when I realized how dreadful life would seem if we couldn't remember our past and recall fond memories or dreams and experience the beautiful nostalgia that sets your heart in motion for wanting to go back and re-experience that sublime moment/dream :O

I mean reminiscing is my favorite past time for goodness sakes!

[Serenity]

I LOVE this one, it is a great write and I enjoyed reading it, it flowed just perfectly and the meaning behind it is just so surreal, it is incredible. I like it just slides from one line to the next, it just flows right off of your lips and fills the air with a sense of calmness and thoughtfulness...

[Sleeping Maiden]

Nice work. Hmmm memories are interesting. There can be good and bad. This poem is saddening but i love the deep meaning of it. =) Really good.

[Tate Morgan]

pERHAPS IT IS A BLESSING TO THE OLD THAT THEY FORGET ALL THE MEMORIES THAT THEY HELD SO DEAR

[Victoria Iankova]

I love this. It's written so well. Good job.

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Short but filled to the brim as all of you writings are..
This made me think of several different things..but one was of an aged person with Alzheimer’s...
Memories gone and left me astray,
Alone without a thought,

Alone without a memory, in this world forever.

Thats probably not what you meant with this...but I guess thats what I seen and read, since I know so many with this disease..

Lovely piece as always

[Jazique]

Awe so sad but, yet lovely. As who are we without our memories but, a mist in the wind. Well love the sweet short simple and touch of the dreams and memories that make us but, can easily stray.

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams are odd. Sometime I go back in time in my dreams. Awake wishing for a different place and ending. I enjoyed this poem. Open the doors to thoughts and old dreams. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote