To love and to hold

To do anything if it will please you

I can be the mist

I can be the star

I can be the best

I would travel far

If it means

I can hold you

Author's Note

This is actually a happy ending hopefully....... Again = just means reminiscing.... someone far away

Reviews

[Marie]

This poem displays a longing to be with someone so very special, someone who is so much loved that the poetess will cross the ocean deep or the mountains high to be with the one she loves. Feelings so nicely expressed in both word and imagery. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, Snow...

[Snow_]

Thanks a lot

[Marie]

Most welcome Snow...

[Amy R]

Very lovely, such short poem, yet so full of life and meaning.
Thanks for sharing..
-Amy

[Snow_]

thanks a lot

[Brandy]

This is beautiful in every way.

I'll be . . . anything.
' If it means
I can hold you. '

Your thoughts leave me breathless.

I've decided to place this in my favorites, to read again and again. : )

[Snow_]

Thank you....so much

[Tumi]

very lovely lines, all stanza are strong, from the mist to the star
you are the best and will travel far. very good

[Snow_]

thanks....

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

lovely. the first two lines are to be remembered. they express that feeling of 'i will do anything for you,' in a way that is not cliche. the first lines carry this poem, and the rest of the lines clarfies the meaning. i kept reading thinking, yes... i want to be the mist too.

[Snow_]

Thank you....Glad you liked it...i thought it was cliche lol

[Dave W.]

These are improving, good job Snow.....

[Snow_]

Thank you....

[Jeyanthi]

Again - gives the meaning to the reasons
Nice one 👍

[Snow_]

Thank you....