Snuggles Arms Wide Open

Snuggles is looking for some arms to jump up into

Snuggles Arms Wide Open

 

Setting here lonely

No one to hold me,

Wishing you would

Pick me up and,

Squeeze me

 

Snuggles bear soft

Snuggles bear clean

Snuggles bear,

Is peeking around the corner

Hoping to be seen,

 

Looking upon you, you and,

You

 

Arms wide open

Please won’t you hold me?

 

Lying down beside me

Feeling the rhythm of your

Heart beat

Snuggles can’t help

But giggle, seeing his toes wiggle

 

 

Reviews

[Katherine Hall]

You know, I actually had a Snuggles bear when I was a little girl? I think it's in my box of things for my own children one day :)
Very sweet, without being too saccharine. One typo I think I found: "hoping" for the last line of stanza 2?
Something kind of plaintive about the 'please won't you hold me?' line. I guess even teddy bears need to feel loved.
~Katherine

[Courtney Elizabeth]

awww this is cute hahah nice ryming :)

[Tori]

AW!! I freakin love bears...espically in teddy form. They make exclellent chew toys...mwaahhhh!!! Not but seriously, cute poem.

[lost inside]

Awe this is so darling
Love this....Kimmy

[Sseoni]

Aww, this is so cute! It's heartwarming and sweet! It makes me think of my own stuffed teddy bear! Great poem!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

oh my god i just want to squeeeeeeeezeeeeeeeeeeee you so tight...you have made my day ....x0x0x0 thank you for sharing such love and joy! x0x0x0x0

[deeps]

Awe! This is so sweet such a wonderful write!

[Anastasia Starlena]

Ahh adorabley sweet. Great piece.

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is a cute poem and the
writer must be a most loveable
creature, with wiggly toes
and who knows.

Rated 100 %

---- Eagle Cruagh

[*** Hey Jude***]

The song with arms wide open came to mind when I read the title. this piece reminds us as human beings want to be held, loved and snuggle. I hope you find that comfort soon! ~ Jude :-)
PS Love your Avatar!