Friendship

Just a short poem on friendship..

An imperishable and unbreakable bond we share,
All the troubles together we bear
When one's hurt the others care,
So strong our bond is that none can tear,

Yes my friend, that's the FRIENDSHIP we share.

Author's Note

A really short poem..i wrote it while completing my school project on friendship.. Please feel free to criticize...I would love to improve on my writing skills..

Reviews

[Decidious wind]

No this is perfect! It shouldnt be longer. Beauty is in simplicity. This defines true friendship something which is rare.

[Sofia]

Thank you so much.. I'm glad that you found it to be perfect😃

[Michael's Demon]

This is short and simple in the best of ways. There aren't any frills or overly fancy language because it doesn't need it- it would probably sound out of place.

[Sofia]

Thank you very much for ur kind words..I appreciate it..😃

[Najam Us Saher]

How sweet....Loved the rhyming as well...

[Sofia]

Thank you very much!! I thought not to post it cuz it wasn't tht gud..but seeing ur reviews I'm feeling really happy..

[Najam Us Saher]

Always give your work a try... You are most welcome...

[Surya]

Haha, indeed it is a beautiful bond..I loved it...:)

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!! I'm really happy..

[pia]

Brb sending this to my best friend omg i loved this !!! Cute stuff

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!! You made me super happy..glad to know u loved it..