LONGING WITH INFATUATION

This was originally an "ice-breaker".

Is it possible to feel affection

For someone you hardly know?

Or, is this a case of infatuation

Like those from my youth long ago?

With your intelligent, bright eyes,

And your playful, mischievous smile,

You have succeeded to revitalize

The compassion I lost for a while.

With fondness, to you, this verse I send

In the hope, I can become a friend.

Author's Note

I know this sounds juvenile, but it was a spur of the moment

Reviews

[kcalel825]

this piece sounds splendid, a piece i would pay cash to recieve..

[Arjun Singh]

well....d bst pieces r written in d spur of d moment....like u delieverd dis gr8, creative piece!!!
A gd 1.... :)

[SpitfireGrrrl]

This is lovely! You captured that first blush of feeling so well :) Thank you!

[Gee]

Ah sweet,did it have the desired effect??

[Solitaireman]

Not really. I am still single, but the ladies I have to whom I sent it loved it.

[Some Kind of Poet]

I hope you have written this from a real life experience you've encountered. We all wish to feel this way about somebody, in hopes that they feel the same way too. Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with us.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

A gift from the heart is never juvenile. It is a bouquet of words to be honored.