Four to Love

Each stanza represents one of the kids, the last is about my feelings for them.

She chose to succeed.
She’s been down a road that is hard,
She has much she needs,
She’s had a life that’s left her scarred.

She has a good heart.
She’s not perfect, yet she is kind.
She is also smart,
She’s wise and listens, her mind’s bright.

He is also bright.
He’s often misunderstood,
He is my loved knight,
He’s sacrificing, and he’s good.

She loves her best friends.
She’s not had it hard,
She likes to go with the new trends,
She’s never been scarred.

They choose to succeed
They’re not perfect, they rise above.
They ‘oft do good deeds
They're my children, they are much loved.

Author's Note

Critical review appreciated. Though weak imagery ect... I did work on meter/foot. I just cant quit get it down!?

Reviews

[Ebs]

Loved it! Nice to read a love poem about the love between parents and childrens.
Thank you for entering the "Someone Special" contest.

Ebs