Winter Of The Heart

(Haiku) The heart is empty as the winter's frost comes

I feel nothing now

A barren, empty wasteland
Darkness covers me.

Reviews

[Nath]

You manage to bring across the emotions - or the lack of such - very well in those few lines. I think the form supports the feeling, that because it's a haiku, you can convey that there is "nothing" better than you would, perhaps, if you wrote more. It is possible to write a lot about nothing, but it makes more sense to write little, as you did, and leave that to sink in. That works very well here, well done!