The icing on my cake

Very short poem :)

You are the icing on my cake

The sweet part in which I want to save till last

The bit I want to keep forever

But know that you shall go stale

If your beauty is not devoured.

Author's Note

Random lol :) x

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Ha! What a treasure of a poem
Very consuming

[LareBear]

Sweet, sweet cake topping
A good metaphor for life?
Save the best for last.

-A haiku review

[rae52]

random but really good