Mr Bluebird
A Poem by
Sophster300
Hey Mr Bluebird
How do you do?
Hey, Mr Bluebird
I'm talking to you!
Hey Mr Bluebird
Sat in a tree
Hey Mr Bluebird
You sing so nicely
Hey Mr Bluebird
With feathers so blue
Hey Mr Bluebird
And then off he flew
Into the country
His wings wide apart
Such a cute bird
He flew like a dart
© 2011 Sophster300
Reviews
Cute little bluebird
Inspires this little ditty
Then off we all fly
-A haiku review
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
love it
Posted 14 Years Ago
love it
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Thankyou Sirah, I do think it would make more sense if it was bird instead of birdie...Thanks again :) x
Posted 14 Years Ago
Thankyou Sirah, I do think it would make more sense if it was bird instead of birdie...Thanks again :) x
Loved it, very nice poem.but I think in the second last line it should be
Such a cute bird
Instead of
Such a cute birdie
But that's just my opinion but still enjoyed it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Loved it, very nice poem.but I think in the second last line it should be
Such a cute bird
Instead of
Such a cute birdie
But that's just my opinion but still enjoyed it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 11, 2011
Last Updated on August 11, 2011