Mr Bluebird

Mr Bluebird

A Poem by Sophster300

 

Hey Mr Bluebird

How do you do?

Hey, Mr Bluebird

I'm talking to you!

 

Hey Mr Bluebird

Sat in a tree

Hey Mr Bluebird

You sing so nicely

 

Hey Mr Bluebird

With feathers so blue

Hey Mr Bluebird

And then off he flew

 

Into the country

His wings wide apart

Such a cute bird

He flew like a dart

© 2011 Sophster300


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Cute little bluebird
Inspires this little ditty
Then off we all fly

-A haiku review

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thankyou Sirah, I do think it would make more sense if it was bird instead of birdie...Thanks again :) x

Posted 14 Years Ago


Loved it, very nice poem.but I think in the second last line it should be
Such a cute bird
Instead of
Such a cute birdie
But that's just my opinion but still enjoyed it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 11, 2011
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Sophster300
Sophster300

Warrington, United Kingdom