We hope...

We hope for eternity

We hope for relief

We hope for peace

We hope for change

 

Our hopes shattered

Our hopes shredded

Our hopes shambled

Our hopes shortened

 

We still hope not to die

We still hope not to ail

We still hope to be calm!

We still hope to be fine

 

Our hopes resourced

Our hopes reinforced

Our hopes reacquired

Our hopes recovered

Reviews

[Wall Hermitt]

Hello again Centfie. This is yet another amazing poem that centres around the truth behind idealistic hopes that reside within our minds. Perhaps you address your message not in a general manner but rather to reflect on hopeful thinking that arises upon adversities faced in life. Hope is healthy and enables us to pull through... Great and uplifting final stanza. Thanks for the share.

[Centfie]

I appreciate your comment/review very much. Thank you. What Do you think of the 3rd stanza ? Anywhere you think I could do better? THANKS.

[AprilRN1210]

I like the shifts in tenses, the evolution of our hopes in life.. It shows the struggles within these hopes and how they can change, evolve, and carry us through. Very nicely done..