Inside

Inside insanity.

Scared...Confused

Can'tseeCan'tbreathe

Darkness...

Only Darkness...

Nothing else

but...Sounds!

Those screams...

So familiar now, I know it,

Are they my own?

Author's Note

Just sort of...My idea on what being absolutely insane would be. I'd love to know what you think. :)

Reviews

[nono]

"Darkness" Seem to see what poets write a lot about. And you know it works the harder you think sometimes it's the darker something is nicely done this is beautiful!

[Voice11]

You, my friend, have perfected emotion in so few words. I couldn't do that. This piece is brilliant!

[Tallulah]

I love how you wrote this. It all seems to come out in a rush which i think how insanity is. I love it.

[Flo_writer]

I liked this, you captured a lost mind in so few a words. I think you would do well writing a story on insanity or anything dark and menacing in nature.