Break You

You shattered so....Easily.

You broke so easily,
Little Puppet,
You screamed so perfectly, so loud,
You begged, you pleaded,
and you bled
My Puppet, you bled...

You did everything I asked you to do,
Just as I asked,
just as I had wanted,
My toy,
My Little Puppet with the sad yellow eyes,
your skin was like porcelain,
and you shattered like it, too.  

Author's Note

*evil laugh* I love writing like this. Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[nono]

I wrote a poem called "Break Me"

But let's say yours is much much better even though I say that a lot it's true lol your talented and people have no right to say your not! Good job!

[Voice11]

Evil...demented...good start. Develop the character a bit more and it will be perfect

[Tallulah]

THis was amazing. I loved it. THe imagery and description was amazing. THe wording was great and it all flowed so well together.

[Identity Thefted]

...and the blood flows out, washing away the urge to massacre. Peace will follow... for a little while, at least.

You are very talented, sir!

[Deadofnight]

This is scary s**t almost sounds like rape to me, I know! In the city it happen easy and no body hears you scream nobody. you can beg an they dont stop and you bleed an they dont care ,ya you just a pupet to them. you got true words here hopen it diden happen to you.

[Melissa Kesead]

wow, dark and wicked. Nicely done!