Scar

My own personal map of you.

I have a map of you

like a web that wraps around you

tracing my fingers on your skin

I can't tell where you end and I begin

You sigh in your sleep

you say my name

while the shadows creep

you are mine to claim

and the scars on your skin

so soft and pale

I can see the light within

and the scars on your skin

lead me to your heart

where that light came from the start.

 

Author's Note

Felt like being a sap again XD

Reviews

[Voice11]

A very nice sappy poem. I know it relates to me and any poem that can relate to the reader is a very good one indeed =)

[Taylor H]

i dont know why but i felt like if you read this a loud you would have to whisper it lol great job

[Tallulah]

This si soft soft and sweet. It has to be one of my favorites by you. I love the imagery here. Its so beautiful and loving.
like a web that wraps around you
tracing my fingers on your skin

^ My fave lines

[Bud]

What's wrong with being a sap? It makes for excellent writing...as this shows. Fantastic write, Aveira! Keep up the Great works of art!