Dancing In the Rain

I look at you, as the rain falls

as the thunder and lightening grow,

illuminating you and your handsome face,

there is this strength flowing through you

like the blood that makes you move.

We'll dance with each other in the rain

and I'll be lost in the sea of your eyes.

 

Author's Note

I'm being a saaaaaaaap. ^^

Reviews

[Voice11]

Very nice. You are really good at being sappy without the cliche lol

[Aekmy]

"And I'll be lost in the sea of your eyes" So pretty. You should enter this in the Rain contest.
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/7605/
Here's the link just in case you want to. :D

-Maria

[Lexi Nicole]

So cute