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The way you make me move...

Fingers travel over my skin

I gasp

you smile, lips pressed against my hair

you say my name

the air is quiet except for the rustling of sheets

Your hands tangle in mine,

fingers laced together

you kiss my lips,

I moan and we move

together,

we writhe

I am yours,

darling,

and yours alone.

Author's Note

This is the closest I'll ever get to erotica XD I don't know where this is coming from, I've been feeling kind of sappy lately. I want to know what you guys think, I really like it, I kind of think it's pretty in a sense.

Reviews

[Voice11]

Its very intense for how short it is. Great write

[Georgia Gypsy]

This is a pretty scene you have painted for us...great job.
very sensual...:)

[Tallulah]

ooh i love it. its so simple but says so much.i love it. great job.

[Aj]

your right, its not..it flirts with the boundries of erotica though...i liked it..very sexy.

[Winter Poison]

Daaaaaang.

Nice work. =D

[Jae]

i wouldnt consider it erotica. i would just consider it a sexy-almost-make-out-session. lol. well its very coolish annd full of awsomefully, awsomeful, awsomeness. good job chicki


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