On My Feet

Pull me back from the nightmares beneath my memories.

I shake my head and start to scream

your hands on my face

pulling my back from the nightmares beneath my memories

to reality it seems

to you, and your soft and gentle voice

"Come back to me, honey."

Will I?

Blindly reaching through a thick haze

of darkness and strange senses

I feel your hand and you grasp mine and you pull

and I stand on my feet again.

Author's Note

I dun know what inspired this. XD But I like it. What do you think?

Reviews

[Voice11]

Very nice. Its kindof cute =)

[An owl on the moon]

Very powerful and visually alive... Your description of life's nightmares is vivid, making your rescue from the pain and fear so amazing. Excellent write!

[megaluv92]

this is really good. very emotional. ♥

[Lunar Lightning]

Very well writen. I think it would be a great idea for a book of poems branching off of this subject.

Luna

[Bud]

I like it. Outstanding! The ending is Poetically Perfect in my eyes!

[Georgia Gypsy]

I think you should have a book of poems and stories devoted to the crazy dreams you have! This is great....