Delicious

Out of one long, cataclysmic eclipse
Trembling beauty graces your lips
You can stand in columns of light
And take stalwart steps out towards night
Gentle kisses trailing down skin
It’s hard to tell where one person ends and the other begins
Deliciously sweet and engulfed in heat
Eye’s can meet and we can speak
But silence can be better left unbroken
Movement can say the words unspoken
Between us there is dependence and minds made one
Things are forgotten easily, but this story has only just begun.

Author's Note

.......:D
I like being a sap- and I haven't written anything like this in a while. ^_^ let me know what you think plez :P

Reviews

[Saturn's Lover]

That was delicious lol, fun to read. Nice job.

[melissa]

great i love it had a good flow to it...

[Georgia Gypsy]

This is like a valentines day poem...but i think everyday should be valentines day!!! You are the best sort of sap Aveira! you show you're talent by how you can write dark tales, happy up-beat stuff, and all the little points between...
You are an amazing writer...(i know i've told you that before), dont want you to forget it though!!!

This is beautiful, sentimental and a perfect picture of love and devotion...
might be going in my fav's...most of what you write is in there!