Deep inside

When I look into your eyes,

I see fire.

When I look at your lips,

I feel lust.

When I touch your chest,

I can feel your heartbeat,

I can even hear it…

 

Do you love me?

Do you feel the same?

Please answer me!

I need to know…

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Nice shot. You capture your feelings in word and then let words mingle with poetry .. in poetic forms.. well written!

[Angad Waraich]

Short and sweet such is the felling we call love

[Saddam]

Do you love me?
Do you feel the same?

Oh dear! It is very difficult to answer such a easy question. But love the way you express it. It is coming within my deep heart, Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smiles..................

[Gee]

Sigh.......ok,yes.........Nice poem Miss