Love cascade

" Untangle my tresses, let the wind embrace me As I surrender to the raindrops' melody Dewy droplets caressing my skin, senses set free Your warm touch wash away all my misery.

In this moment, let me embrace the eternity

Falling in love with myself, a chance to be free For every raindrop that falls, a new beginning is bestowed A soul awakened, emotions overflowed

Let me bask in this sensation, an enchanting spell As I delve deeper into this moment, everything else pales In this fleeting moment of pure bliss I am reborn, an eternal soul, full of love and grace."

Author's Note

Just tried something new, hope you'll like it. Still learning, so don't mind about grammar. Feel free to review. It's my pleasure to get your feedback. Thank you for your valuable time.

Reviews

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Soyam... nice work there.

Very good poetry.

God is in the rain... ;)

Blessed be!!!

[Soyam]

Thanks for your kind words:)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.

;)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"Your warm touch wash away all my misery." - loved this line.
The whole poem was a treat to read. tyfs. I also felt your title was fitting.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

[Soyam]

My goodness you like it. Thanks for your kind words. I'll, soon.