Woman: Mystery_or_Myth?

A mystery unfolds...

A woman's heart is deep like an ocean,

intense,  immense,  euphoric in nature. 

Women's are mysterious. 

Let's break the myth, it's too much to hold.

Let's unfold the truth, before it's too much cold. 

No, its not us,  it's mankind's failure to know,

The depths of a woman's heart, where emotions grow.

Author's Note

We are not mysterious. What do you think...?

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Holy mole! I have no words......my voice is in my awe! Apart from simple tweaks that it should just be "women" (no 's) and "much too cold" makes more sense than "too much cold" (and better poetically too), this is absolutely divine and true to form! You have marvellous sound work throughout (my favourite moment of such being "mysterious/myth it's" - stupendous!) and just the message is golden. Short, powerful, and profound. Well done!

[Soyam]

My pleasure you like it so much ....

Oh, that's a little glitch while penning, thanks for your suggestions.

Im so glad you stopped by and give it your valuable time. I appreciate it a lot, because it means a lot.

Thanks again for the visiting, "'mystery' 😉☺

[emipoemi]

The pleasure is all mine to have read it. Keep writing!

[Betty Hermelee]

I think , in part, women are mysterious, an effort to truly understand.... our soul is deep like the ocean depths...and difficult to reach and close in.... one must dissect the heart and soul of a women to trluy love her....Well pinned my friend.
Warmly, B

[Soyam]

Well said ma'am. I agree with with your every single word. Man must put efforts to understand them.

Thanks for your valuable time and kind words. I appreciate it much.

[Betty Hermelee]

yes!! and you're very welcome!
Warmly, B

[willweb]

I like to view a woman as mysterious, it makes it so much more fun to learn about her. This was fun and I love the theme.

[Soyam]

Look like you are interested in mysterious stuffs... hope you'll be able to understand the mystery.

Thanks for your kind words, I appreciate it.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

I think Women are one of the Universe's greatest mysteries...

And the best creation of God...

A world without females would be a sterile dead world.

Amazing poetry.

Blessed be!

😇👻👍

[Soyam]

Both men and women indeed.

Yes but, mysteries can unfold....

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

I appreciate your valuable time and kind words.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.

Blessed be!

[ZeppoZealand]

No not women it is man's failure to understand the woman heart. I like this what you said and how you said it.

[Soyam]

Actually, you are right.

But you know, sometimes a man's heart is too difficult to know.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your time.

[Coyote Poetry]

Women are both mystery and myth. I have six sisters, three daughters and one wife. Today I know less about women then when I was young. Thank you Soyam for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Soyam]

Wow... seems you are always surrounded up with females. Sounds too good of you. ☺ three daughters... that's too beautiful. They must be generous, like you ☺.

Thanks for your valuable time and kind words. I appreciate it a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poetry and you are welcome Soyam.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think we all have our secrets both males and females...
I think women seem to be more complicated and men seem to be more closed up.

But if men are willing to explore and be patient...they can figure out the puzzle that is a female.
j.

[Soyam]

Yes we both hold.
I like your thought up upon it.

Hope they will to , someday. But its too true that, men also suffer from a lots of mental pressures.

Thanks for your valuable time. I look it.