The Only

 

Falling silent, falling still

Is our world growing chill?

 

Darkness smothers the last of Light

Here the remnant Noble fight-

 

Blade against blade, man duels man

Here are the Fallen, overran-

 

All are the Fallen, All are the Chill

Forever silenced, eternally still-

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Very interesting write. Painting this scene of a battle taking place where there can be no winner. For in the end both must face the fact of there actions. One dies the other must live with that fact of having blood on their hands. Your words very flowing and impactful. I rather enjoyed this piece.


Great Job!!!!

[Emily B]

I like it, Doug. Spare of words sometimes has the greatest impact.