Freedom From Pain

Your fist connects with my head,

Over and over you punch,

I fall to the ground tears roll down my face,

You just yell get up,

I cry my-self to sleep almost every night,

Is there more to life then this?

I have had only a taste,

Can I?

Will I?

Ever break free,

Do you know what's it like to be so sad?

and then have to pretend to be happy the next day,

I long for the day were I don't have to be scared,

Were I don't live in terror.

Reviews

Amazing poem. I love how you started it off with a bang. It really got me hooked right away. I also love the topic that you chose. I just hope that you were not writing this from experience. Another thing is that I like how easy it is to relate to this poem for some people because it happens so often. Great job I can't wait to read more of your poetry. Please read request me some of your pieces. Great job.

[Sarah Greaton]

Love you and all your poetry, you are too amazing, excellent job :)