Sweet Serene

 

She is sweet serene

the beauty of her sleek thighs

the real in her eyes

color of velvet purple

dipped in honey

she is queen bee

the master artistry

lady hip bohemian

calypso in the wind

I am she

and she my sweet serene

Reviews

[Emily B]

I think you've got your groove on. . . this is so melodic, sweetly singing, hips swaying, Maya ANgelou would say it in her rich voice and give us all chills . . .

My favorite line

the real in her eyes

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh my so very seductive and passionate write... WOW now that made me tingle.

[SM Davis]

Love this! Yes, exotic and mysterious, sweet, and palatable...every woman should feel so sublime. Wonderful!

[Rain]

lady hip bohemian
calypso in the wind

Some great lines in this piece. I loved it. Rain..

[Antony]

OMG! this a beautiful piece of poetry, I just loved the meaning behind this and the poem just floated right at the reader, terrific job Spoken.

[T]

Absolutely gorgeous poetry! I loved it ... hugs

[BrightEyes]

"the REAL in her eyes"
omg I love that line

I loved the imagery here ; beautifully written
almost like a view of oneself through the looking glass
and seeing all the beauty held there;

my interpretation but either way - great write

*hugs*
laura

[Mr. Lopez]

Short and sweet. Was this written this way to stress the attributes of the writer? lol

the beauty of her sleek thighs
the real in her eyes

Great lines! loved it.

Mr.Lopez