Clear Skies?

when things start to go well sometimes i wonder how long it will last

The clouds stomped away today

nothing but the distant rumble of their feet remain

to humble me

I remember the thunder

and the chill

I know it like it remains still

though the sun warms the damp of  my eye

there will always be a part of me

that lies huddled underneath the blankets

shaking

fearing the wind will change

knowing somewhere out there

the skies are not clear

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh yes dear life you could never count on,times its so good to you,and times you wonder how bad it could turn..
I loved the way you put those ideas so creatively..
Clouds passed away only for the day..could hear the distant rumble of their feet
I still remember the thunder and the chill,though I see now the sun starting to warm me
But always part of me will huddle underneath the thick cover shaking
And fearing the wind could change its mind anytime now
for I know the skies somewhere out there will never be clear at all
lovely thoughts ,lovely write..

[bob, small b. aka invs]

sounds like you're looking for the dark cloud in the silver linings. but i do relate to the feeling. sometimes it seems that calms are only those moments before storms. you expressed that nicely here.

[Sean M. Addams]

i really like this piece and again very well done imagery in this piece ... it really stands out to me in this piece... nice job...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow I know this feeling all to well, life always seems to find a way to shake things up just when you life is smooth sailing. A wonderfully expressed piece of writing. Nice seeing you back.