Ashes
A Poem by Hallow
Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Another day
Where I rust
Ashes to fire
Dust to wind
Another note
And next of kin
Ashes to dirt
Dust to sky
Wings out
Ready to fly
Ashes to lust
Dust to love
Yearn again
From above
© 2025 Hallow
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I like how this poem started out a bit dreary and ended with hope. Life seems to be that way. We pick ourselves up and find hope to keep moving on. Thank you for sharing your writing.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
I didn't see that at first. I think I like your perspective more than mine. Thank you.
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Added on January 5, 2025
Last Updated on January 5, 2025
Author
Hallow
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Even the sun couldn't illuminate the shadows of my mind. It's run cold, and there's no hope to find. more..
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