Art
A Poem by Hallow
And I dig in my veins
And I dig in my guts
I reached the bone
Damn, that sucks.
I hear the skin squish
Slippery and warm.
A cracking, wet bone
Sharp like a thorn.
My blood is a river
A slaughter of roses.
Metallic nourishment
The questions it poses
Looking at this canvas,
I'm almost finished.
S**t, I have to hurry
My sight is diminished.
© 2025 Hallow
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Wonderful imagery here, and love the slant rhyme in the first two stanzas.
Very effective.
j.
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I think your first show is going to be rather small. This kind of art should not be practiced more than once a decade.
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A little body horror poetry... it's close enough to halloween.
Posted 5 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 15, 2025
Last Updated on August 15, 2025
Author
Hallow
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Even the sun couldn't illuminate the shadows of my mind. It's run cold, and there's no hope to find. more..
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