Liminal

Liminal

A Poem by Hallow

Quiet, soft snow falls
To the west of the fence.
A sunny raindrop calls
Just east with humid sense.

Cold, creaky wind creeps
This side of the frozen wall
While hot, stagnate air keeps
Past the thorns and cricket call.

Blizzards of blindness howl
Over the line of frozen death.
Hurricanes that wail so foul
Just east with suffocating breath.

A winter lonely and devoid
On the west, dark and white.
A summer of color, destroyed
East filled with rapturous light.

Toeing the line of east to west
Winter and summer could clash.
Perhaps, if I sit in a stubborn jest
A tornadic mingle bare of thrash.

© 2025 Hallow


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Beautiful love this it’s our hot summer here I’ll blow some heat over if I could

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hallow

1 Month Ago

I appreciate that. I'm a southerner that's never acclimated to the cold xD
This poem reminds me of someone I know
And right now it’s winter. :-)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dale Pavolko

1 Month Ago

Indeed she’s the love of my life . But her moods can change in an instant
Hallow

1 Month Ago

It takes a strong person to love chaos how it needs to be loved. Hopefully, your winter will be more.. read more
Dale Pavolko

1 Month Ago

It’s up to about 72 right now :-)

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Added on December 7, 2025
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Even the sun couldn't illuminate the shadows of my mind. It's run cold, and there's no hope to find. more..