Cats

It is about cats.

Cats

Cats are the fun things you have in your life,

You can play with them with their favorite ball or anything eles,

You can talk to them,

and you can feed their favorite cat food.

That is why I think everyone should have a Cat,

if they really like Cats like I do.

Author's Note

Please read and review my poem.

Reviews

[Chelsea]

Well done! Much better than your snowmobiling poem!
I love cats, they’re one of my favourite animals! So I found this poem very enjoyable, and that I could relate to what you said.
Cats are the fun things you have in your life,
You can play with them,
You can talk to them,
Those are very powerful! Cats are great fun, the light of life! They have human characteristics, meaning that you can interact with them! Really, they’re just another member of the family! Very well done!
and do a lot of other things with them.
That is why I think everyone should have a Cat,
if they really like Cats like I do.

and do a lot of things with them- I would add a few lines here. What can you do with a cat that’s fun? Play with it? Feed it? Maybe add a bit more description!
The final two lines, very well done! I like them. I agree, if you’re a cat person you should definitely own one! They’re so cute!
Nice poem Kat :)

[Frances O'Neill]

I like cats, too!

[~Death Is The Key~]

I do agree with ~DeathEnchanted~ the flow is a little rough but your on your way. keep it up! I beleive that you can make your poems come to life if you try a little harder kat24 all you need is a little amagination and rymping word (if you want to rymp that is). Just keep your eye on the prize as the saying goes. good luck and ask for help if you need it.
:D Raven

[SilentDreamer]

Cute picture. :D Yeah, cats are cute. The flow was a little iffy but it was a very cute poem. Great job. :D