Friends

It is about my friends.

Friends

My friends are weird, and somethings can be crazy too. But they can also, be a lot of fun !!!

My friend Rosalie  is a book worm especially of the Romo and Juliet books, and she  likes DeSoto better than

our school. She can be sometimes  crazy too.  My friend  Drema reads a lot of books too but she reads all

sorts of books and she dreams a lot  about stuff. She can sometimes  be crazy too.

Nine Trails likes to be sometimes  crazy too . She is very playful  .  Alice likes to read books too.

She likes to read all sorts of books . She can be sometimes  crazy too.  Bell  can be sometimes  crazy

too. She is very playful.   Now me, I really like sports especially softball and basketball. I can sometimes

get crazy too.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Raven666]

makes me think back :) thanks KitKat. its a very well done writing :)

[Jazique]

What a way to write about your friend but, to describe them. Nice work they seem like wonderful friends to have around. In other words that was crazy awesome.

[Kiri Nells]

Too many "too"s to be too perfect. :) It's almost there, just needs a little revision. Really honest and light spirited! Great job!

[BlackRose]

So true, so true. Well you got it right. Raven is right though, take off the 'too'. Other than that though, great job. You're doing well!

[~Death Is The Key~]

great poem but take off the "too" on the end of the 1st line. Spelling needs a little tune up. This isn't really a poem but instead a story or something like that. Interesting name Nine trails?? do you mean "Nine Tails"? "be" in line 7 shouldn't be there. Other then that it's a great story/ poem. good job!

Raven :D

[SilentDreamer]

Okay, interesting. One thing however is that when you mean sometimes you write "somethings" instead. May want to change that. You also say the word "too" alot. Writing it in a poetry format would have been better too. However besides these faults this is an interesting poem. Shows how you feel and expresses emotion well. Great job. :D