Snow

It is about snow in the winter.

Snow

It is great when you get snow.

Snow is fun to play in and it is

also, fun to drive your snowmobile in.

When you get a lot of snow you get to get

out of school the whole day which is

the part about getting snow and

also, that we get to go snowmobile.

That is why I really like snow.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kiri Nells]

Fun and light poem. I've always like free verse! I must say though, poetry isn't just writing a few sentences and breaking them up into lines. Poetry should be about emotion and sharing in a creative way. While I find this poem very creative, and I do like it very much, just remember what I said for future reference. It is a good poem, though! :)
Kiri

[TheFemininePad]

A good poem that presents some great imagery. The structure is very good, and the flow is very smooth. I would add a few more stanzas though. It might help to convey to your reader how much your really enjoy snow. Dive more into your reasons why you enjoy the snow, and maybe a personal experience attached to the poem as well.

[Brook Hughes]

Great job Kit Kat. Keep writing and we will keep reviewing!

[Black Cat Fever]

I always loved getting a day off from school when it snowed deep enough. It's beautiful and fun to walk in, its like an adventure. It's cooooollllddddddddddddd too! I'm hoping for a White Christmas this year!

[~Death Is The Key~]

good work. I really like it :)

[BlackRose]

good job. You make it clear what you think. Keep writing!