About A Teacher I used to have

It is about a teacher I used to have.

About A Teacher I used to have

 

 

Her name was Mrs. Olson.

She was really nice,

really caring, she was always there for you

when you needed her. She would

always be nice and say Hi

or How is it going for  you?

She was one of the best teachers.

I ever knew  and ever will ever know.

Then just a couple of days ago

she died at the age of 50 to

pancrertaic cancer. To this

day I still think of her as being really nice to everyone.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jazique]

Awe to how nice she was and the sadness of her death. For its always the good that have to go home. Well done.

[TheFemininePad]

Very touching and a great tribute to someone who touched your life in a profound way. I feel like your poem does a great job of passing along how important this teacher was to you. It's sad that she died at 50. Life on Earth is very fleeting. Your emotions are conveyed very well to the reader.

[Chelsea]

This was pretty sad :( I'm sorry you had to lose your teacher. But I'm sure, she would have loved this.
I like how it's about a teacher. I think that teacher's can hold a special place in our heart. They teach us so much and sometimes are much more than a teacher!
A lovely write remembering her.

[Call Me Blu]

It is nice, but you need to work on the poetic aspect. It sounds a little choppy and kind of like a story.

[Brook Hughes]

Kit Kat I love it!

[Michael X]

wow, this is what sentimental poetry is about, memories, life love and death, everything that encompasses existence,jkeep writing like this,
and you will go far in poetry, thanks for sharing your talent.

[~Death Is The Key~]

i totally agree with BlackRose one this one. Mrs. Olson seems very nice and it sucks that you had to lose her to pancrertaic cancer.

[BlackRose]

Wow. That's really nice of you to think of her when writing. I've got a few suggestions. First, 'How is it going FOR you? She was one of the best teachers that i ever knew. Try to get it so it will flow a little easier. Other than that, good job.