Will not regret...

You are exactly what I want...
what I need.
Refuse to feel this sense of regret,
promiscuous youth,purity in threat.


You claim it's not that,
And so I hope...moments without company...
In solitude I mope.
Life has changed and so have I...
Presence in my life,you made worth while.

Certain decisions,made so fast,
Deteriorating image of innocence,look in aghast.
You mean a lot,clearly...
And when you return after a few months,will miss you dearly.


In the moment,now or never,
My tender heart will recollect you in future endeavors,
Convinced that you care,
Mocking me on a pedestal indeed I fear.
Sad because I am happy...
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Reviews

[Talesha]

You are right,he showed her this supposed happiness..and it does seem unfinished,this piece.Simply because it is still unfolding.Thanks for your kind words,Antonio and Kaze.

[Antonio Hernandez]

In one regard, I'm noticing that there is an interesting pattern, wherein each clause seems to imaginatively materialize as a succession of flashing images, like a montage or a flashback told in pictures. In another regard, I see a girl who fell in love young and doesn't regret it (even though people make her feel like she should) because her lover taught her what happiness was, and she wants to feel sad that he is leaving after all but he's made her feel too happy to do that. But I feel like the poem is unfinished, like you want to say more. Nevertheless, I did enjoy it.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Brilliantly written Talesha!

Kaze~ :-)