weakening

I want happiness,

I want my family,

I want my love to be faithful.

I want my long distance to work out...

I want to be happy again

i am so weak and helpless,

i pray to st jude and st anthony to help me

to help me be positive,to be strong

to make good decisions,for my relationship to not go wrong.

lord,when i tell you i love him,

i tell you with truth,

loving someone so much that it hurts

to imagine life without them

but they can without you...

love is painful,but it is kind..

because time with him

i feel peace and happiness 

in my heart and my mind

Reviews

[Jennesis]

such an honest piece of your heart....

[Alfred Kukitz]

You have a nice sweetness Talesha. Honesty pervades your words. I spoke to St. Anthony recently he answered my prayer, almost immediately.

Happy Holidays!

[Talesha]

Thanks Alfred,I'm glad you got your prayers answered.Happy Holidays :)

[TheLostMind]

A really good write Talesha.. :).. "i am so weak and helpless".. No, you are not weak and helpless.. You have hope.. which means you have not given up.. You are still fighting.

loving someone so much that it hurts
to imagine life without them
but they can without you...
love is painful,but it is kind..
because time with him
i feel peace and happiness
in my heart and my mind

Well, I can totally relate to this.. life is not fair... It is like a magic box.. We will have to deal with whatever comes out of it. It could be good. . It could be bad. But we should never stop believing... Some of us fall in love knowing it will never work out.. knowing that the person you love will never love you back... yet, there is this fading hope.. This small ray of light. That keeps us alive..:)

Great job. . :)

[Talesha]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"i feel peace and happiness
in my heart and my mind"
Had the tone of a prayer. I agree with the need and want of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Talesha]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[TheLostMind]

You are welcome.. :)

[Alexis]

This is really good :) as I too, can relate to what it feels like to love someone so much it hurts. Beautifully written piece, wish to be able to read more in the future. Great love, Alexis ^_^

[Talesha]

Thank you so much Alexis..Good luck with your love.Hope you never give up hope in a love so great. ^_^