Arch Formation

My Way

I kneel on my balcony and I pray

As the stars shine on my face

I see myself in a distant future

Where everything is possible

Arch formation

One step at a time

Im alive

Author's Note

Arch Formation

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Kneeling/Praying is surrendering ourselves including our future to God. Prayer is powerful but you are right..."one step at a time". We should not lose hoe when we can't instantly have what we want.

Smart. Well-done!

[TheBubbleManiac]

Being alive is such a precious thing. We need to cherish every moment because we really have no idea when our time will be up. Praying, and envisioning what your future could look like is such a wonderful and scary thing. Sometimes you aren't able to see what you envision, but you live to see the future.our lives are confusing, but we just need to take it one step at a time.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

being alive is a good thing...being able to pray for future is another...

and acceptance of what is...a third thing that is good.

j.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow jacob your interpretation does make a lot of sense.

There are persons out there that are always in a hurry to get somewhere that do not have time to pray.

And there are persons out there that pray because they are not in a hurry.

That is what I learned from your review.

Thank You

[DIVYA]

All is possible with prayer. Such beautiful expressions in this poem.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you dear writer for your interpretation. It is true prayer is important it builds on us positivity.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome.

[Calamityofgin]

Yes my sweet darlin..as Shakespeare said..it not in the stsrs but in ourselves that we are underlings.
So if we feel.that light.and let it enrich our own resolve. Our own dreams, nothing is imposdible!
Love darlin
Jennifer

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi Jennifer, Your words are truly encouraging and your style of writing is so unique that it makes it almost impossible not to imagine the imagery illustrations of your creative subjects that are important for the survival of our human race.

And you are right "Our own dreams, nothing is imposdible!"

Thank you dear unique poetess.

[Cody]

Felt like this was written from my point of view. I can tell you beautifully travel spiritually like no other. Great job

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you dear writer for your valuable interpretation and am glad that you think the same as Arch Formation "Felt like this was written from my point of view."

Am looking forward to visiting your page to interpret some of your work.

[Zahra]

This is exquisite and full of faith. No matter what people say, we have to keep taking our own small steps - because anything is possible. I definitely see your poetic wings soaring. :) 100/100 A smooth piece.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi how are you, your writings did make an impression on me and I do appreciate the words you used in this review to encourage me.

I wrote this because I refuse to believe that we are alone and I strongly believe that there are Angels out there that think the same as us and that they are watching because they might have the same beliefs and that they will be there as Arch Angels encouraging forward into the future.

I know that when persons pass away that is almost the end, and that if we came from the Adam and Eve Garden then I have learned my lesson and I want to go back to Heaven and not anywhere else.

And you are right when we as writers write is mainly for ourselves and if others are encouraged in our same beliefs then Arch Formation We Are Alive and we do exist.