Hot Liquid Love

I didn’t think I could get any higher 'til my heart dove into the depths of your fire.

hot liquid love,
pouring down from the skies,
splashing into your gorgeous, star speckled eyes,
my heart blows wide open,
and cries out in delight,
the light of you blinding,
so warm and so bright,
I'm a heavenly feather,
floating high, and so free,
drowning deep in your heart,
love's sweet ecstasy.


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Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

Such a sweet and tender poem. Congratulations! You have such a wonderful light tough with the words!

[Hayley]

"splashing into your gorgeous, star speckled eyes"
I love the flow and rhyme scheme of this poem. Your poem is truly "hot liquid love". The last line really nails it. Good job!