I Danced

Posted for a friend who thinks she has NO talent...

The night was dark and  quiet...
The streets deserted and cold...
I stood there with my face lifted to the sky...
Snowflakes drifting softly down...
Peace surrounded and filled me...
I lifted my arms and began to dance...
In a world that was all my own...
With music that floated around me...
In the stillness of the night I celebrated...
Just being me...



Sandy
1/29/09

Reviews

[Star]

This woman is no longer a friend, but I hope she learned to dance her dance and I thank you all for your reviews of her work.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...:)

[TL Boehm]

Star this is beautiful and I wish I could drag your hindparts back to writing. I know you think you write dark....but you are a light and an inspiration.

[Emily B]

We all have talent. Some of us just take more coaxing to let it loose to the winds.

Tell your friend to let her light shine.

[Star]

Are y'all not commenting because you agree with her? She would love some constructive feedback...