Dance with me my love.

Dance with me my love,

Come on lets dance.

Dance with me my love,

Lets take this chance.

I know I'm not rich,

I know I'm not smart.

I know I'm not perfect,

But lets make a start.

Dance with me my love,

Lets show them all.

Dance with me my love,

we'll rule the ball.

I know I'm not rich,

I know I'm not smart.

I know I'm not perfect,

but lets make a start. 

Dance with me my love,

Just take my hand.

Just you and me,

We'll make our last stand.

I know I'm not rich,

I know I'm not smart.

I know I'm not perfect,

But lets make a start.

Why don't you dance my love,

is it because I'm poor?

Why don't you dance my love,

as I beg on the floor.

Why don't you dance my love,

is it because I'm not right?

Why don't you dance my love,

I put up this fight.

I know I'm not rich,

I know I'm not smart.

I know I'm not perfect,

Is that why you wouldn't make a start?

Our life would have been perfect,

If only you had Danced.

Reviews

[NeonWolves]

Very lovely song. It bounced off in a nice melody from the start. It also plays out a very sweet scene in my head. Great job. I love it. ^.^

[Coffee Vampier]

I thought this was a love song at first haha i was mistaken!
Very sad, wish they had taken the chance. i love the flow and the story, great write :)

[Maimai]

Flowed nicely, well written, love it :) Keep writing!

[Kyla H]

Flowed together very nicely, it's a bit sad if you think about it but leaves an opening for us to wonder..what if they would have danced? Nicely done.

[guiltyascharged]

I love the verse "I know I'm not rich, I know I'm not smart" that really captured me. This flowed very well up until "Is that why you wouldn't' make a start?", it seemed a bit too long so it shattered the nice flow. But I really liked this, you did amazing and I love your works!

[Grace Catherine C.]

I'm not sure I'd have repeated the
"I know I'm not rich,
I know I'm not smart.
I know I'm not perfect,
Is that why you wouldn't make a start?"
part so much, but it was very good.

[brenda]

you surprised me with the ending ! lol like always amazing poem !:)

[joshua deathdealer]

Yea I felt the optimistic flow as well and then the bitter end. Excellent write Star.

[TJ]

Wow such a heartbreaking piece. Not because of the ending alone but because of how you began with such a happy and melodic town, it even seemed to have an optimistic flow right up until the end.
Nice work!

[ImagineItAll]

I really like this. It feels so nice reading it.