I'm sorry

A Tanka form poem.

I am so sorry 

I see that it's all my fault 

Let me try again 

It's in my nature, sorry 

Just please don't shut me out

Author's Note

edit: I had one too many syllables in line four.
Tanka poems are 5 lines long with syllables in each line being 5, 7, 5, 7 & 7

Reviews

[Bhumika Devkota]

Nice poem. A little sort and try to put more feelings to it. But great job.

[Quinn]

Thank you. Unfortunately the style of poem I chose to do, tanka, requires 5 sentences with appropriate syllables. It's like a haiku but two lines longer.