And dew was but a science.

Good morning world!

In the mist of morning,

silence comes dropping slow.

The dew forms on the grass.

Like little drops of tears on blades of green.

They dance, a winter waltz

beauty in the midst of pain.

Cold memories do they invoke

Fiery ice, the intensity building

And the sun peeks through the horizon

Like symphonic music

A Clash of drums

And the earth is enveloped

The dew complete

Silence! Let her cry.

Her time is scarce.

Author's Note

Had music in my head this morning, saw nature in my sleep and wrote. Comments? =)

Reviews

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

"They dance, a winter waltz"
This is my favorite line. The images that follow the phrase are soft and easy. Quite enjoyable.
"Cold memories do they invoke"
Your sentence structure here is a little off. If you had been using this inverted format for the whole poem I wouldn't have cared, but it's an outlier and a bit nasty at that.
Nice write.

[bluessadmood]

yes that was nice ..so poetic
as mist of morn do feel,dew drops hit ever green grass
like music ,the sun did peek through ,and pain was enhanced
scenery danced on music so fine,let silence comes so she could cry
i really loved thios ,wonderful images ..i really felt a fine morning ,feelings enhanced
lovely write..

[Daniel88Batson]

Wow this would be really powerfull with music behind it.
"Let her cry", very powerful, very simple, very awesome.
I always enjoy your work. well done.

[Aidz]

An enjoyable read, some great lines, felt soothing.. well to me it did

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

I love the early morning mist and the dew dripping off leaves up high. Very majestic piece i loved it.

[FuMiko]

Nature is beautiful, and you presented that wonderfully. It feels like a waltz, doesn't it? Very well written, thank you for sharing. =]

[Lily Mae]

I'm weird but it made me feel like all is silent and in the dew of life and yet the sun bursts out and (the clash of drums) and seizes the day... I love it...xx

[Hunter C. Brown]

love the poem. very well written. good job, and keep on writing

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Silence comes dropping slow.......love this line, a beautiful gem and it is so lovely to see someone else who adores silence.