The vow

Summer rolling in

They paid their dues on a summer cruise

They thought it through the amazing blues

The little distant beats

Of summer running feet

Were rolling inside their heads

Underneath bed spreads

This is not a movie

Some random chick flick pick

Click on the screen

And watch the rolling scene

Author's Note

Just a picture I thought of drinking coffee on a rainy day.

Reviews

[donny ingraham]

you're great with images and rhyme, also you are direct. This poem is excellent. Thnak you for sharing

[Dinkleman]

Yeah! Great job with the rhyming. It is pretty catchy and paints a cool picture. Keep up the good work!

[Blessed_Angel]

wow i like the rhyming in here. It is amazing great job.. :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

great piece of brevity.. love the specificity and how the message is direct and to the point.. great write..

[Leah Natalie]

Love it!

[Lily Mae]

To welcome summer in this way is just beautiful. :) x