Her Eyes

            Her eyes were diamonds

They twinkled in the sunlight

        She lit up my life

Reviews

[Captain Rilen]

You're good at making people smile :D

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[GPR]

Truly beautiful! Loved reading this!

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Another well-written and heartfelt senryu... the eyes always get me too... a fine tribute to one who brought you much light!

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I remember writing these in school. This is a great one. Well done!

[Ellay]

Thank You :D

[Relic]

~ A summary worth writing about. Someone special in our lives can change our entire outlook. Well done. ~

[Ellay]

Thank you Relic :)

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A lovely senryu. A beautiful tribute of something that was the source of light in your life. :D

[Ellay]

Thank you. that was just the message i was going for :D