Donuts!

mmm....donuts...

 Donuts are quite good

      Like a small piece of heaven

Nom nom nom nom nom

Author's Note

Can you tell I was hungry when I wrote this.....:)

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

MMMMMMMMM!!!! LOVE donuts. so good and sugary. LOL

[Captain Rilen]

Yummy!!!!!!!! Haha a funny short piece!

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[kyam]

So cute! So delicious! I'm psychic and I can feel you were hungry. nom nom

[Ellay]

Haha, I was hungry when I wrote this :) Thank you for the review!

[GPR]

Donuts are so delicious! This spoke to my soul!

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hahahaha.... a fun senryu, Pepitro... sounds like a Homer Simpson moment :)

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[....................]

you are welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This was a fun read :) donuts...now i'm hungry... Lol :)

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[Sai]

I'm really hungry for donuts now. I could imagine a group of children peering through a bakery and singing this song while licking their lips.

[Ellay]

Thank you for the review :D That is just the type of picture I was going for!

[wordman]

i can taste them now,hot out of the bakery

[Ellay]

Haha yeah! Just the feeling I wanted my readers to feel! Glad you liked it :D

[wordman]

we have several do nut shops here and it pains me to pass by and smell the aromas

[Ellay]

Yeah there are a million near me as well and everyday I'm just like "give me ur donuts!" XD

[wordman]

i was in the restaurant business for 14 years,never worked around donuts i would be a lard a*s if i did

[Ellay]

So would I lol! :D

[Lady Lola]

Lol, nice senryuu! Made me hungry :)

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[Stan Lee]

ROFL... literally laughing out loud at this one... thanks for making my day Pepitro... nom nom nom nom.. hilarious! Nice to see someone who enjoys 'quite nice' donuts! :D
Thanks for sharing. :)

[Ellay]

You're welcome :D