Unforgiven

I made the choices without thinking.

i caused the pain to the ones I love.

Now i'm in a world of suffering.

I lost my way to the future,

I have tried to redo the bad, but

there is no more love.

I need help I need someone

to forgive me and my sins

This isn't what i want anymore

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~Emotions, love, tender and faith bring us love & Hate, lust, sin and lies serve us this .. "Unforgiven" ~~

I adore this beautiful thought-invoking emotional write!

[Steven Ingels]

Thanks alot

[StarlaFireDelta]

forgiveness is an illusion ... and holding on to the past keeps you there..great expression of sadness

[Schyala]

Excellent short poem full of pathos and regret, I loved it! 100/100

[Inspiring Writer]

Nice write, well expressed what you want to forgive. Yeh, i do agree the world's filled with bad/fake love, there's sin everywhere spread out... If you're in the crowed area world, you'll be get something new in your every single step that won't be forgiven to you... to a human. It makes our memory you know. The world's one, the life's one, don't let others do spoil it without your permission, try to live it as you want to.
A powerful write i read at the night. Your creativity's great as well as your imaginary's too great. Well written.

[Ashley]

hell yeh! tells the truth. It's not my type of poem....but I do like the meaning

[Victoria Lillian Lewis]

Very personal and telling piece. Honesty is a virtue and here it is on display. Raw emotion and desperation feed the audience of this poem. It makes me recall my mistakes and I like that it can affect me that way. Thank you for sharing.

[Skye]

I am at the side of the one that refuses to forgive. Yes, if one proves they wish to change, why deny them the change? However, if they claim to change, and remain the same, what should be done?

[Steven Ingels]

Try to start over with them and see where it goes from there

[plainme]

a rather personal write, but a chain of thoughts which are identifiable in my chest of experiences. Finding someone is the way forward, they help us realize the beauty of now and let the demons sink.