On The Hill

A few lines inspired by a day mountain walking in Wales in horrendous weather a couple of years ago. I was alone in a white-out at the top.....but loved every second.

Blackest slate sky
Hardest cold rain
Just me and myself
In this desolate, windswept spot.....
That feels just like heaven should.

Reviews

[B]

I like how open ended this is

[StevieStar]

Thanks for takng the time to read and comment. I tried to make it longer, but it was about a very short, specific moment in time, so I didn't want to add anything else in the end.....

[B]

Its quite special

It really feels like a glimpse of an emotion you were feeling

Not sure what it is

Its like a photograph