Laws Of Poetic Property ~NEW EVOCA

Self recorded.. not perfect.. but.. still a great creative outlet. :o)

 

 

From this day forward
All violators will be prosecuted
For all the alphabetic individuals
They've prostituted
For personal gain
All pens will be confiscated
And held as evidence
Under poetic domain
And we will retain
Strict levels of surveillance
To ensure that all measures
Are being taken
To prevent
Any further damage
To the poetic name

Throughout
The past decade
We have begun to see
More and more poetic exploitation
And decided to form a foundation
In hope that inspiration
Can once again be restored
We can't afford
To be losing minds
To such demeaning material

Therefore
To take action
We have decided to
Write the future
For all of those
Whom under us
Will carry on the tradition
Of rhythm and rendition
Putting forth nothing
But highbrow compositions
Completely supportive
Of what poetry and spoken word
Is meant to be

I hereby decree
That poetry
Will not come to be
Something dead
The time has come
We surpassed
All the intellectual discrimination
Creating a new rhythmic generation
To better the welfare of lingual affect
We have the right to protect
All the words that stabilize our creativity
And have seen too much negativity
Surround the basis of what we choose to represent

We ask for all to write in compliance
With our alliance
As we try to make the poetic world
A better place
And hope that the past illusionists that called themselves poets
Can be replaced
With those more worthy of the cause

Let us
Together
Write the Future

Reviews

[Girl, Interrupted]

i REALLY liked the first stanza.
All pens will be confiscated
And held as evidence
Under poetic domain
And we will retain
Strict levels of surveillance
To ensure that all measures
Are being taken
To prevent
Any further damage
To the poetic name


great poem, otherwise. it reminds me that some people...i guess they dont know where the boundary lies for writing trash or treasure. no self-control really and all their arguments are weak.

[Marc L Abbott]

This is one of those poems that in the end you have to stand up and cheer and yell to the top of your voice Damn Right! I love this piece. You can tell it was written from the heart.

[Ilene M.W. Lush]

i absolutely adore you. and will be forever great full for this site for putting us together. as always i am in awe of your passion and skillz with words and flow. and your voice, miss sexy! woohoo.

it is because of you that i remain inspired.

[Lyric Laceile, People A..]

We surpassed
All the intellectual discrimination
Creating a new rhythmic generation
To better the welfare of lingual affect
We have the right to protect

These words!!! Love the flow. Brilliant.

[Tony Murray]

This was well timed for me. I have for quite sometime been away an just found myself lured back into the art by the invite to read this. I feel a kinship with the message here. I feel like the tone of your read along is perfect. Write the Future.

[Ernie Roman]

Hey Li !!! havent heard from you in awhile...but i gotta say i LOVE the rhyme in the first verse...and the whole write the future....f****n brilliant....!!! this is awesome....thanks! for allowin me to read.peace!

[Justin J. Sales]

this is f****n' good!!!!!
you've out done your self!

[Tha Wind AKA VERBAL OX]

the was crazy aZZ tight...that sounded like some chi town poetry for real an ihavent even done the evoca thing yet...wanted to hear the beat an voice thatwas comin through my head first...ok look i wrote like this long azz review went an edited it...an some how erased the sh!tso in retrospect...with a quicker summationwith out listning to the evoca i heard this rowdy militant voice that spit nuthin but raw uncut unadultrarated fire...an the evoca didnt give me that...so that was the only real let downbut alas it was still hot azz fluck...i hear you makin ill noise...you loca with it ma...madd talent i see in you...you got my creative juices floodin...im going to have to stop playin an throw some of my new stuffis on here so you can hear me...minus the voca baby i leave that 2 the rest of you...to make it do wut it do...: O this is my owwwwwwwwwwww facelata sunshine... till the mornin

[~crazy Beautiful~]

the poem was creative and it was about creativity, I very much enjoyed this piece, very well said.

[LadyLincoln]

Awesome work, you really shine through on this piece!

[Gandré]

your reading was also breathtaking!